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[May. 19th, 2004|11:47 pm]
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A couple of poems....


Walls of Steel
Tear down these walls that surround my heart,
The barriers have grown from mistrust,
Your spite and malevolence may keep us apart,
But I fail to believe we only shared lust,

The images blur and I can’t see where I’m headed,
No messages, no warning, no direction,
And this feeling inside burns me like acid,
I fear where I’m going and I’m filled with caution

I believed that you could make me complete,
And you’re killing me now with fear and deceit.

Stephen
You’re a prince and a saviour,
So deep and so loving,
And these are the features I adore,
The strength of your being,

But where are you now?
Lost in your self pity,
And you just can’t allow,
Freedom of your sanity,

You unfolded my wings,
You showed me the light,
You brought me these things,
And I’m holding them tight,

I dreamt that you’d guide,
You’d guide me all the way,
But you pushed me aside,
And I’m scared I’ll go astray.
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[User Picture]From: aracely_star
2004-05-22 09:50 pm (UTC)
ooh i really that last stanza on the stephen poem. they are both really good. =D
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[User Picture]From: faerieevenstar
2004-05-23 11:40 am (UTC)
thankyou... they were both one poem and the first one was the stanzas that were too long for Stephen... lol I don't like Walls of Steel as much but thankyou very much :)
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