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[May. 21st, 2004|07:56 pm]
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Here's another poem... it's hard to type these with my hand so firmly stapled to my forehead...

Why does noone comment on anything?

Wings
Wings,
Wings outstretched,
I trust in you,
I collapse into your arms,
I know you will hear me,
And give me the wings,
The wings I need,
To break the chains,
That surround my soul,
Your light pervades me,
Straight to the core,
Warming my veins,
Growing my wings,
Helping me learn to see,
In a way I couldn’t perceive before,
Helping my mind expand,
Reinforcing my wings,
To feel your love,
I don’t deserve you.
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[User Picture]From: aracely_star
2004-05-22 10:12 am (UTC)
aw this is good. the last line is a bit sudden compared to the stuff in the poem but it creates a good ending. and i suck at reviewing - sorry. but yayness with the poem. xx
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