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[Aug. 2nd, 2004|07:18 pm]
goff_creativity

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I feel the whisper in the air
A promise of a bygone care
That comes to me when I am low
And envelopes me even though
My soul is hard and laden with
The thoughts within my heart do give
Reason to give up the fight
And turn away, give in to flight
I follow this without a thought
Without a meaning or retort
I hide myself away from fears
And bond to me my hidden tears

And if by daylight I should see
The person I am meant to be
Give to me what I am owed
The erradication of this load
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[User Picture]From: aracely_star
2004-08-02 07:42 pm (UTC)

:)

i like it.
the ending sets it off nicely.
the only thing i'd say is that because there is no end of line punctuation it makes it a bit hard to read. like where to take a breath and stuff. i've had end of line punctuation hammered into my and now i'm kind of hooked.
but i really like it =D xx
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